Post by Icestar on Mar 31, 2011 16:16:57 GMT -5
Your Cats name: Jaywing
Age: 35 moons
Gender: Tom
Clan: ThunderClan
Rank: Warrior
Discription: Jaywing is a semi-dark dusty brown tom. He is large, very large, in size. Despite this, Jaywing is light on his paws and a very skilled hunter. He is excellant in battles, but still gets wounds like every other cat. He has a gruesome scar over his right eye where no fur will ever grow again, but it has done nothing to interfere with his sight. His eyes are a handsome, dazzling green in color and stand out against his brown pelt. His fur is short in length and his legs are slightly shorter than his brother's and sister's legs. They are strong and can carry him across long distances surprisingly quickly. His paws are a couple shades darker than the rest of Jaywing's coat and his tail is extraordinarily long. On his right, hind leg, Jaywing has an odd looking, bird-like marking that is black as the night sky and is kind of rough around the edges.
Personallity: Jaywing lives by the code and are strongly loyal to Thunderclan. Jaywing, helps the deputy carry out orders and offers help with patrols and hunting. Jaywing, however, is easily ticked. He will claw your ears given the chance, but only if you are a rival. He knows too well it's against the code to fight against your own clanmates. Jaywing tries to steer away from the elders den, never wanting to check them for pests or change their bedding. He likes to listen their stories, but that's as far as he goes with the elders. He also cannot easily be tricked. He knows a lot of the times when someone is lying, but not all the time. When Jaywing is tricked, he will become infuriated and often fight with whoever had lied to him. Jaywing is young and still needs a lot of guidance.
History: Jaywing was born into Thunderclan, her parents were Shadefur and Rosepetal. Rosepetal was a loving and devoted mother, but her father never played with Jaywing and her brothers, her mother did the playing with Jaywing, and Jaywing, and Jaywing. Jaywing and Jaywing were so closely bonded with Jaywing, and Jaywing so bonded with her brothers, that they went everywhere together, did everything together. They were closer to each other than they were to their parents. However, no matter how young Jaywing was as a kit, she was the most mature and thoughtful of the litter. And nothing got past her.
When they were apprenticed, Jaykit became Jaypaw and his mentor was Blacktail, a senior warrior. He trained him hard, making sure he knew how to do every move perfectly. When he made a mistake, Jaypaw was corrected. Blacktail was a kind warrior, and noble friend. He helped Jaypaw with every move and every hunting stance. Jaypaw learned slowly, but Blacktail didn’t mind, still he was proud of Jaypaw. But one day, during battle training, Jaypaw heard a yowl of pain. He knew instantly it was another cat in trouble, and before that, he knew it was his sister. He bolted from the clearing to help.
When they burst through the clearing to see what was going on with their sister, Jaypaw and Lionpaw, who wasn't far away and also came to help, saw Shadefur's paw on Blackpaw's neck, claws unsheathed and digging into her throat. Lion[aw threw himself at Shadefur and tried to knock him off balance. The warrior just threw Lionpaw away from him with a flick of his dark gray paw. Hearing the mentors, Shadefur let Lionpaw tackle him to the ground without a fight. When the other warriors finally entered the training hollow, they were shocked to see what Lionpaw was doing.
They saw Lionpaw with his claws unsheathed, raking his father's dark gray pelt. The warriors and leader ordered Lionpaw off and demanded his reason for attacking another warrior. When he tried to explain, they believed him a liar. Blackpaw could see that Lionpaw wanted her support, but she knew that her father would harm her if she spoke against him. When she said nothing, Lionpaw was herded back to camp for punishment. Jawpaw followed his mentor as well back to camp, leaving Blackpaw alone with her father once more. Shadefur got up and shook his coat before congratulating her lie.
Jaypaw finally became a warrior after five moons of training. He knew from the moment he turned into a warrior, that his father could no longer threaten Blackpelt. At the next gathering, Blackpelt spoke out of turn, revealing her father really was. "Shadefur is not who you think he is!" she yowled, joining the leaders where they sat above her and joined them so she could be seen by all the clans. When her leader tried to silence her, she ignored him and kept speaking. "During my apprenticeship, he threatened me. He scolded my harshly for every mistake I made."
She had continued her speech that she had run through her head so many times before the gathering. "Each beating was worse than the last. My brother, Lionclaw, had tried to save me from Shadefur, my own father! But I was wrong not to defend him when he was scolded by his mentor for attacking a senior warrior." Blackpelt sighed and glanced at her brother. "I knew it was wrong then, and I know it was wrong now. I do regret not aiding my brother, but I am standing here before you to say that Shadefur mustn't be trusted, ever!"
Blackpelt yowled the final words over the shocked mews of the cats below. But as she jumped down to rejoin her brothers Lionclaw and Jaywing, something thrust into her side, forcing the breath from her lungs. Towering above Blackpelt with all the fury of a thousand badgers in his icy blue eyes, Shadefur stood, pinning his own daughter to the ground. He struck her with unsheathed claws and she yowled with pain. But before Lionclaw and Jaywing could get to her, the leaders of all the clans already had. Shadowclan's leader and Riverclan's leader forced the senior warrior away easily.
Jaywing's leader stood in front of the traitor with eyes like blue fire. Jaywing rushed with Lionclaw to help Blackpelt up. When she was on her paws again, Jaywing turned in time to see his leader, Bramblestar, looking at Shadefur straight in the eyes, and what he said to Shadefur made Blackpelt beam warm with happiness and a feeling of protection provided by her leader. Bramblestar looked Shadefur in the eyes and banished him from all the clans. "You have been a good warrior when it came to fighting and hunting," Bramblestar said with anger, his amber eyes staring fiercely.
"But when a warrior of mine treats an apprentice with such cruelty, they will be punished. Shadefur, I Bramblestar, put you into exile for what you have done! If you ever show your face around here again, I give my warriors permission to kill you on sight." Bramblestar turned sharply and looked at Blackpelt with worried eyes. His medicine cat, Foxfoot, had finished looking over Blackpelt for injuries. When Bramblestar asked if she had gotten any, Foxfoot shook his head. Bramblestar looked at Shadefur once more. "Release him." he said calmly to the other leaders. They nodded curtly, releasing Shadefur.
Bramblestar noticed how the Windclan leader was crouched behind Shadefur, ready to pounce on the traitor if he dared to leap at Blackpelt again. But now, the Windclan leader sat tall and wrapped her tail around her paws. Shadefur didn't move a muscle as he stared angrily at Lionclaw and Blackpelt. Bramblestar could see Blackpelt was starting to get frightened and stepped between them. "Well, get out of clan territory! And don't come back." Bramblestar snarled as Shadefur turned to leave. Then he was gone. Later that night, Rosepetal snuck out of camp and disappeared without a trace. Since then, Jaywing and his sister and brother have lived with Thunderclan as loyal warriors.
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Age: 35 moons
Gender: Tom
Clan: ThunderClan
Rank: Warrior
Discription: Jaywing is a semi-dark dusty brown tom. He is large, very large, in size. Despite this, Jaywing is light on his paws and a very skilled hunter. He is excellant in battles, but still gets wounds like every other cat. He has a gruesome scar over his right eye where no fur will ever grow again, but it has done nothing to interfere with his sight. His eyes are a handsome, dazzling green in color and stand out against his brown pelt. His fur is short in length and his legs are slightly shorter than his brother's and sister's legs. They are strong and can carry him across long distances surprisingly quickly. His paws are a couple shades darker than the rest of Jaywing's coat and his tail is extraordinarily long. On his right, hind leg, Jaywing has an odd looking, bird-like marking that is black as the night sky and is kind of rough around the edges.
Personallity: Jaywing lives by the code and are strongly loyal to Thunderclan. Jaywing, helps the deputy carry out orders and offers help with patrols and hunting. Jaywing, however, is easily ticked. He will claw your ears given the chance, but only if you are a rival. He knows too well it's against the code to fight against your own clanmates. Jaywing tries to steer away from the elders den, never wanting to check them for pests or change their bedding. He likes to listen their stories, but that's as far as he goes with the elders. He also cannot easily be tricked. He knows a lot of the times when someone is lying, but not all the time. When Jaywing is tricked, he will become infuriated and often fight with whoever had lied to him. Jaywing is young and still needs a lot of guidance.
History: Jaywing was born into Thunderclan, her parents were Shadefur and Rosepetal. Rosepetal was a loving and devoted mother, but her father never played with Jaywing and her brothers, her mother did the playing with Jaywing, and Jaywing, and Jaywing. Jaywing and Jaywing were so closely bonded with Jaywing, and Jaywing so bonded with her brothers, that they went everywhere together, did everything together. They were closer to each other than they were to their parents. However, no matter how young Jaywing was as a kit, she was the most mature and thoughtful of the litter. And nothing got past her.
When they were apprenticed, Jaykit became Jaypaw and his mentor was Blacktail, a senior warrior. He trained him hard, making sure he knew how to do every move perfectly. When he made a mistake, Jaypaw was corrected. Blacktail was a kind warrior, and noble friend. He helped Jaypaw with every move and every hunting stance. Jaypaw learned slowly, but Blacktail didn’t mind, still he was proud of Jaypaw. But one day, during battle training, Jaypaw heard a yowl of pain. He knew instantly it was another cat in trouble, and before that, he knew it was his sister. He bolted from the clearing to help.
When they burst through the clearing to see what was going on with their sister, Jaypaw and Lionpaw, who wasn't far away and also came to help, saw Shadefur's paw on Blackpaw's neck, claws unsheathed and digging into her throat. Lion[aw threw himself at Shadefur and tried to knock him off balance. The warrior just threw Lionpaw away from him with a flick of his dark gray paw. Hearing the mentors, Shadefur let Lionpaw tackle him to the ground without a fight. When the other warriors finally entered the training hollow, they were shocked to see what Lionpaw was doing.
They saw Lionpaw with his claws unsheathed, raking his father's dark gray pelt. The warriors and leader ordered Lionpaw off and demanded his reason for attacking another warrior. When he tried to explain, they believed him a liar. Blackpaw could see that Lionpaw wanted her support, but she knew that her father would harm her if she spoke against him. When she said nothing, Lionpaw was herded back to camp for punishment. Jawpaw followed his mentor as well back to camp, leaving Blackpaw alone with her father once more. Shadefur got up and shook his coat before congratulating her lie.
Jaypaw finally became a warrior after five moons of training. He knew from the moment he turned into a warrior, that his father could no longer threaten Blackpelt. At the next gathering, Blackpelt spoke out of turn, revealing her father really was. "Shadefur is not who you think he is!" she yowled, joining the leaders where they sat above her and joined them so she could be seen by all the clans. When her leader tried to silence her, she ignored him and kept speaking. "During my apprenticeship, he threatened me. He scolded my harshly for every mistake I made."
She had continued her speech that she had run through her head so many times before the gathering. "Each beating was worse than the last. My brother, Lionclaw, had tried to save me from Shadefur, my own father! But I was wrong not to defend him when he was scolded by his mentor for attacking a senior warrior." Blackpelt sighed and glanced at her brother. "I knew it was wrong then, and I know it was wrong now. I do regret not aiding my brother, but I am standing here before you to say that Shadefur mustn't be trusted, ever!"
Blackpelt yowled the final words over the shocked mews of the cats below. But as she jumped down to rejoin her brothers Lionclaw and Jaywing, something thrust into her side, forcing the breath from her lungs. Towering above Blackpelt with all the fury of a thousand badgers in his icy blue eyes, Shadefur stood, pinning his own daughter to the ground. He struck her with unsheathed claws and she yowled with pain. But before Lionclaw and Jaywing could get to her, the leaders of all the clans already had. Shadowclan's leader and Riverclan's leader forced the senior warrior away easily.
Jaywing's leader stood in front of the traitor with eyes like blue fire. Jaywing rushed with Lionclaw to help Blackpelt up. When she was on her paws again, Jaywing turned in time to see his leader, Bramblestar, looking at Shadefur straight in the eyes, and what he said to Shadefur made Blackpelt beam warm with happiness and a feeling of protection provided by her leader. Bramblestar looked Shadefur in the eyes and banished him from all the clans. "You have been a good warrior when it came to fighting and hunting," Bramblestar said with anger, his amber eyes staring fiercely.
"But when a warrior of mine treats an apprentice with such cruelty, they will be punished. Shadefur, I Bramblestar, put you into exile for what you have done! If you ever show your face around here again, I give my warriors permission to kill you on sight." Bramblestar turned sharply and looked at Blackpelt with worried eyes. His medicine cat, Foxfoot, had finished looking over Blackpelt for injuries. When Bramblestar asked if she had gotten any, Foxfoot shook his head. Bramblestar looked at Shadefur once more. "Release him." he said calmly to the other leaders. They nodded curtly, releasing Shadefur.
Bramblestar noticed how the Windclan leader was crouched behind Shadefur, ready to pounce on the traitor if he dared to leap at Blackpelt again. But now, the Windclan leader sat tall and wrapped her tail around her paws. Shadefur didn't move a muscle as he stared angrily at Lionclaw and Blackpelt. Bramblestar could see Blackpelt was starting to get frightened and stepped between them. "Well, get out of clan territory! And don't come back." Bramblestar snarled as Shadefur turned to leave. Then he was gone. Later that night, Rosepetal snuck out of camp and disappeared without a trace. Since then, Jaywing and his sister and brother have lived with Thunderclan as loyal warriors.
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